"I am so thankful that we hired you for our feature film project. Your notes were incredibly helpful in working to make a good script into what we now believe will be a great script.
I really appreciate that you worked so quickly to help us meet our production deadline. What you gave us was extremely helpful. You are truly gifted in what you do."
I wanted to thank you for taking the time to break down my script on Elijah. As you know, I've been working on that project for several years and couldn't figure out why it wouldn't work. Your expertise was needed to point the story and script in the right direction. I believe now after you have done your analysis and structure critique, I can use your suggestions to create the "Made for Hollywood" feature film as I wanted to do in the beginning. I've had other, "so call professionals," look at the story and give minor suggestions, which was helpful, but it was not as comprehensive and specific as what I needed that you provided. I admit, I was a little cautious of paying a fee to have my script looked at by a Script Doctor, again as I've Been there and Done that in the past. But I am impressed and appreciate you frankness. And after giving it some thought I feel you were right in your suggestions and I got my monies worth."
"Brian's analysis zeroed in on several weaknesses that undermined my story. The detailed notes he provided were extremely useful, like a booklet on screenplay structure - only written specifically for my story! His attention to theme and counter theme was key in helping me understand how to take the story deep and wide. I'll be back for the next one."
Screenwriter, Vengeance and Honor